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These brown eyes will break your heart
Wow. I don't even want to think of all the many hours I've spend on this picture. It started out as someting entirely different, there was even another character in there but that one looked even more horrible so it got erased  I've altered and erased so much, I'm still not content with the final picture but I couldn't NOT upload it after all those hours! Anyway, this is my character Isluinah and she's one of my most favourite characters to rp. She's reaaaally playful, energetic, curious and a huge flirt. No shame at all. :3 © Picture and character to me Special thanks to ~RainbowFountains for letting me have her Comments
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-- Wszystko ma sens jesli znamy sens zycia...  I think the eye is a little bit too high up, but otherwise, Its absolutely amazing!!I love love love your new shading!!She is absolutely beautiful!!!
Its just breathe taking! -- ♪ ♫ ♪ ♫ ♪ ♥ I ♥ Nickelback!!! ♥ Yes I think so too, in fact.. I'm going to lower it right now, thanks!
-- "Painting is just another way of keeping a diary”.  I'd critique but you'd be like WTF STFU 'cause I'm all noobish and not good.
So I'll just comment. I love the colour scheme for the background, and the expression on the horses face. Well, unicorn's. Very cute. All I got to say is, the right fore looks a little long to me, as if it was dragging on the ground and it looks painful. Unless that's an angle concept I can't get into my head. lol. Very beautiful though, like I said the colours are gorgeous.  -- WHOSE BABY'S THAT? Icon by the great ~silent-sama your welcome!
-- ♪ ♫ ♪ ♫ ♪ ♥ I ♥ Nickelback!!! ♥  Cute design- I love the colors.
 -- "One word, love. Curiosity." I'm Babette! [link] Vent Crawler - all Zekk goodness, always  I'd critique, but I have no sub any more, and it says I can't XD ANd I can't think of anything to say. Oh well...
It's gorgeous anyhow  -- contests [link] Commission prices and examples: [link] Join =Lyrics-Community If you like songwriting  I love this image, you have turned her into such a beautiful character and i have loved watching her develop through your gallery. The background is amazing, the colours work so well together. And the blurred effect is a great way to symbolize movement. ^^
-- Rain~Proud owner of a fat cat [link] Thanks
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I love the colours you used for the sunset, the orange-yellowish colour you used feels so warm. The only issue I feel I see with it is that your horse looks as if her shading is set as it's a pretty, early morning scene. ( at least in my opinion ) My suggestion would be to add a bit more depth to her, make the shadows on her a tad darker, giving it the ' sun setting ' feel
Also what I spotted, you have her anatomy almost perfectly down, but I feel as though her front two legs are a tad bit too long. Maybe it's the angle she's at? I'm not sure, but they seem a little too long in proportion to the rest of her body and her back legs.
Thirdly, make sure you keep her mane and tail looking as if they're going the same ' speed ' y'know?
Otherwise this piece is so pretty! And I'm going to fav it like, 60 times over again haha
Best of luck hunny!
The first thing I noticed about Isluinah is that her tail is just hanging down. With this sort of image, where nearly everything is blurred from motion, I think her tail should be flying with the speed. Also, it looks like the sun is setting from behind, so she should probably be in shadow more.
Her expression really gets me. She seems SO thrilled to be running at high speed, and I love that. Keep up the good work whirl. I know you are capable of wonderful things!
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